“The more he watched, the more he clung to his hopes for summer camp, for reindeer herding, for escaping far north… where he could join the Evenki people, and place reindeer herding at the center of life.”

Excerpt from “A Glass of Fresh, Clean Water from Lake Baikal,” winner of Short Story Contest 2020-21 with Twist and Twain Literary Magazine.

Contest Judges: It is a sad, heart-rending tale of a remote, reindeer-herding people in Siberia, near Lake Baikal, who had a pure life in the wilds until the coming of alcohol. The last scene, where a drunken mother takes one last drink of pure lake water and lies down in the snow to die, is unforgettable. Especially when her young son lies down beside her. It is outstandingly original in both voice and story, with a lasting impact after reading. The story was both darkly funny and moving. Very clever. Right from the beginning, this story had dynamism and flair that captured the interest of the panelists. They admired how the writer was able to do so much in such few words, painting a picture of a way of life and the ways that external, negative influences can undermine generations of tradition.

Note: this short story is also printed in the winter inspired anthology by Quillkeepers Press 2021, entitled Snowdrifts.

Author’s Bio

Raluca Comanelea is a woman writer born in Brasov, Romania. From her desert home in Las Vegas, Nevada, she the surrounding world in fiction colors. She teaches English Composition courses at the University of Nevada, Las Vegas, offers advice on writing at UNLV’s Writing Center, edits manuscripts when opportunity comes her way, and homeschools a curious boy.

Raluca’s fiction and book reviews have been featured in print anthologies such as The Louisville Review, Strange Days Books, Reflex Fiction, Leicester Writes, and in online publications such as Reflex Press, Toho Journal, Storgy Magazine, among other literary venues. Her short story, “A Glass of Fresh, Clean Water from Lake Baikal,” has won the first place prize in Twist and Twain’s Short Story Contest 2020-2021. Raluca’s fiction chapbook, The Art of Surviving in a Glass of Water, was a finalist for Newfound Prose Prize 2021 and for Eyelands Book Awards 2025.  Her fiction novella, “The Museum of Our Realities,” has won the finalist title with Eyelands Book Awards 2021 and has been shortlisted in the Reflex Press Novella Award 2021.

Raluca’s academic work, centered on Tennessee Williams’s female characters and their theatricality, has been featured in Popular Culture Review and in The Rocky Mountain Review of Language and Literature. Raluca is an active participant in RMMLA’s conferences, as chair and panelist for the English Prose and Hemingway sessions. Raluca holds an MA in Literary Studies from UNLV.  She is an MFA student at Spalding University in Kentucky, Louisville.

Find Raluca on X (@RComanelea) and on Instagram.

Raluca Comanelea

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Fiction writer, teacher, and mother

About me

I read across genres and beyond personal taste. I write and revise and trust the present moment, however hard. I teach with an honest attitude. I enjoy dialogues that bloom in the month of July. I am an eternal lover of calligraphy, fountain pens, and marginal notes on manuscripts and any printed page. The smell of rare books brings my mother’s scent back into my nostrils.

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